An interview with the soul
A Poem by
Unwelcomeguest
Just something I started thinking about
Rage, you have to wonder, how many died for you
Love, tell me straight, how many lied for you
Jealousy, answer me this, how many stole for you
Hate, just one question, how many took the toll for you
Pride, an easy one, how many live alone for you
And Happiness, with all your airs and your graces,
Why is it that, in this wide world, so few have even known you
© 2010 Unwelcomeguest
Reviews
Amazing! This says so much more than what is written. This is amazing. The titled grasped me, and I'm so glad I decided to read it!
Posted 13 Years Ago
OMG I love this piece!!! Thanks for sharing:)
Posted 14 Years Ago
OMG I love this piece!!! Thanks for sharing:)
Poem is outstanding. You said so much in so few words. I like the complete poem. The ending was outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
Poem is outstanding. You said so much in so few words. I like the complete poem. The ending was outstanding. Thank you.
Coyote
so true,,,,,,,congratulations
Posted 14 Years Ago
so true,,,,,,,congratulations
This really is an interesting piece. So powerful, especially the lines about happiness. Very thought provoking.
Incredible, i love this
Posted 14 Years Ago
This really is an interesting piece. So powerful, especially the lines about happiness. Very thought provoking.
Incredible, i love this
wow. I love it. Each line is powerful, but I feel the last two lines were especially poignant. Very well written.
Thanx for writing
♥Destiny♥
Posted 14 Years Ago
wow. I love it. Each line is powerful, but I feel the last two lines were especially poignant. Very well written.
Thanx for writing
♥Destiny♥
Such great questions to ask. I believe the answer to the last question is tied into the rage, jealousy, hate and pride. Awesome piece.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Such great questions to ask. I believe the answer to the last question is tied into the rage, jealousy, hate and pride. Awesome piece.
This is so true and so nicely written. Leaves me thinking and asking those questions to myself. Great job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is so true and so nicely written. Leaves me thinking and asking those questions to myself. Great job!
This is wonderfully true, and beautifully done. I do see a couple of things you may want to fix though...
wander vs wonder... wander is the one you use to describe travel, wonder is what you want to use for thinking.
I also think that you wanted to say "Happiness, with all your airs and your graces" unless you meant people were inheriting happiness.
Regardless, the message is still clear, and I enjoyed this piece very much.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is wonderfully true, and beautifully done. I do see a couple of things you may want to fix though...
wander vs wonder... wander is the one you use to describe travel, wonder is what you want to use for thinking.
I also think that you wanted to say "Happiness, with all your airs and your graces" unless you meant people were inheriting happiness.
Regardless, the message is still clear, and I enjoyed this piece very much.
Oh this is wonderful!
Truly, I've read it over and it doesn't loose it's potency.
Added to my favorites. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
Oh this is wonderful!
Truly, I've read it over and it doesn't loose it's potency.
Added to my favorites. :)
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Unwelcomeguest Winchester, Hampshire , United Kingdom
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Well, I'm sixteen and essentially sick and tired of the utter mundanity of the world I get to live in. When I was younger I would pretend to be an alien and escape from school or have imiginary sword ..
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