You make me happy

Oh how childish I get,

When you give me the slightest bit of attention,

A big smile appears on my face,

Nothing can wipe it off.

You know,

You make me happy.

Whether you know it all not,

You make my heart skip a beat,

When you smile at me like that.

My heart of ice melts,

At your warm touch,

It shows signs of life,

Beating ever so quickly.

When you look at me,

You give me butterflies,

Your eyes look right through me.

I cannot deny this anymore,

I love you,

I loved you from the very beginning,

I belong with you.,

You belong with me.

Reviews

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[Y.Badr El Din]

i love the rythem that is emitted out of this poem, great use of of language devices and this poem is great, keep it up!

[zappy]

i like this its very good