Kiss Me?

I lay here seemingly alone.

I feel you close to me.

As if you where here with me.

I want to look over and see you smile back at me.

Your eyes daring me to come closer.

The days of being with you

However I wanted everyday

 Is a thing of the past, as of now.

How I long to kiss you.

Sweetly and innocently.

Passionate and lustful.

Tender and loving.

Just because I can. 

I need to have your kisses,

Your smile,

Your love,

Your touch,

Y-O-U

Baby, I need to be with you.

Reviews

[Chris]

Came back. That sense of distance still holds.

[Relic]

The pangs of loneliness reverberate very strongly in this. The last two stanzas really bring out the heart break.

[Bound In Red]

Thank you very much. I can only say that loneliness only grows each day.

[Relic]

It can take years to get over someone. Unless a new love interest comes along, it can be very depressing. You're welcome.

[Talal Hussain]

Wow that is such a nice composition..loved it :-)

[Bound In Red]

Thank you very much. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"How I long to kiss you.

Sweetly and innocently.

Passionate and lustful.

Tender and loving.

Just because I can.




I need to have your kisses,'

A very passionate write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Bound In Red]

thank you for the read. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Chris]

Missing happens worse at night...

[Bound In Red]

That is the pure truth. Thank you for reading.

[Chris]

welcome...

[shallimarRose]

Phew.. felt this one as real.. love the form, right alignment and the red font.. adds to impact. shallimarRose

[Bound In Red]

Thank you. I like trying to get my readers to connect with even my most personal of writings. I'm a very visual writer. I think how the words look are just as important as how they sound and what they mean.

[shallimarRose]

your welcome.. shallimar