Free?

She thought she was ready

To be free

Of that cage.

The door has been wide open,

For awhile now.

This little bird

Just forgot how to fly

Up, up, into the sky.

She has flapped her wings,

Once or twice.

But they just do not work anymore.

This little bird has forgotten her song to sing,

Turning her into ice.

I just want to soar..

Author's Note

First attempt at writing something that kinda rhymed. So its kind of different.

Reviews

[Melanie Genevieve]

It's amazing how people can forget how to fly and are too afraid to try again, keep themselves locked up for so long even after opportunities pop up all around them. Some people stay trapped forever because they are their own cage. Cool write. I really enjoyed it.

[Bound In Red]

Thank you very much. And I'm very glad you enjoyed the write. :D

[StayStronglilButterfly]

Reminds me of one of my poems of wrote. Nice work!

[Bound In Red]

thank you very much. :)

[writer4eva]

i love this, very descriptive! :)

[Bound In Red]

Thank you! :)

[The Nude Writer]

I like it. I really hope the little bird learns to fly :)
It can be hard to if they have been caged for so long.
Great poem :)

[Bound In Red]

thank you for the review.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Sadly true an image literal and otherwise.
You have brought to mind how one loses ones art when put in forced seclusion.
thx

[Bound In Red]

Thank you for finding one of the many way I wanted this to be taken.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes miss it made an impression

[Bound In Red]

I'm glad you liked it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

do write more...i will review all

[Bound In Red]

Thank you. I have a new poem up. And feel free to look at all my other writing that I have up now.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

will do shure

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A very relatable, and very good poem. I really like it Nesh. And we'll all remember how to fly eventually...

[Bound In Red]

Thank you and I hope so.