More Than Just Clothes Hit the Floor...

Sight.

Taste.

Smell.

Sound.

Touch.

They all go hand in hand.

We let the clothes slip off our bodies

And we start to explore.

Sight:

Just the sight of him shake at my touch.

Is way more than to turn me on.

Thrilling,

Exciting.

This is the sight I never get sick of.

Taste:

The sweetness of whatever we just had to drink

Lasts on his lips.

But there is his own salty taste under this sweetness.

This is the taste I never get sick of.

Smell:

How he always smells,

Indescribable.

Just that it's just his special scent.

There's the scent of me here too.

From all our other times alone...

This is the smell that I never get sick of.

Sound:

The cotton being lifted off my body.

Our denim jeans scratching against each other.

The mattress's groan under our weight and movements.

The click of my belt being unlatched as we kiss.

"Come on baby..."

All the little sounds we love but dont notice,

Once we start to get louder.

Heavy breath, fast and shallow

Turn into moans and begs for more,

"Please..."

Finally a choked scream while not trying to be caught.

These are the sounds I never get sick of.

Touch:

The big one.

Our hair.

Our ears.

Necks,

Chests,

My Back,

and legs.

Everything gets a slight brush or just a teasing breeze.

Others...

Scratched, bitten, pulled, or anything else we can do

To tease each other.

The other senses I can without, but I need his touch the most.

Reviews

[melissa]

sensual and sweet very nice i loved it

[Bound In Red]

I'm very glad you liked it.

[writer4eva]

wow, very descriptive and....graphic, not b/c of the topic, but b/c of ur wording and, just the description of everything, "sight. taste. smell. sound. touch. they all go hand in hand. We let the clothes slip off our bodies. And we start to explore." THAT has to be my fav part! very nice job!

[Bound In Red]

Thank you very much. :D

[The Nude Writer]

Very creative poem :) There is so much that combines for that experience. And the sounds were so true :)

[Bound In Red]

Thank you very much. :)

[soliloquy]

whoa.....nice write! This one really comes together well and .....

I wasnt expecting that! :0)

[Bound In Red]

Thank you. :) And i'm glad you enjoyed it!

[soliloquy]

I did enjoy it. The write was just simply delicious.....

[Bound In Red]

Thank you. I hope you will like my other works.

[Ahmad Cox]

So sensual and beautiful breakdown of the all the senses that are used in love and connecting through intimacy and touch. I really liked this one.

[Bound In Red]

Thank you. :)

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Not gonna lie, reading this this morning made me blush. But from a writer's p.o.v. it's really well written. Well done love~ (no I have no idea why I said that)

[Bound In Red]

Well It is something to blush over so I got my goal. And thanks. :)