Too Bad

I hope you miss me while I'm gone

I'd trade my soul for you,

Would it be worth the time?

Or would you let me waste away?

Where do you think you’re going?

You’re on the upside of things,

Just wait,

You'll go down,

You came into my life,

And now I miss you,

Like a car misses a green light when it's red,

My light is red,

Yours is green,

You’re on full go,

I'm dead in my tracks,

You'll turn to yellow,

When you start to realize what has happen,

I'll get to a yellow soon,

When I see that you’re no good for me,

S**t,

You’re a red,

Now you’re fucked,

Your feeling like you could kill yourself,

You want me,

You’re begging at your knees,

S**t,

You’re too late baby,

I'm at green,

Cause I'm getting better,

Living my life,

While you weren't there to help me,

Damn it,

You’re really fucked over now,

Tables are turned,

You’re broken,

You’re sad,

S**t,

Too bad I'm not sorry,

Too bad I don't want to have you,

Too bad you said good bye,

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

Nicely expressed emotions flowing through this, the fact that you wish to requit the pain he has caused you. I like the thing you did with the cars and lights though, that was simple and fit well with this. Great job