Seductive Heart

Cause I'm a normal human.

Shush your lips,

Close those eyes,

Don’t move a limp,

Squeal and squirm all you please,

It’ll be an ease,

Just let your body free,

Not like you have a choice,

Not like any other seduction,

Strapped down, less squirming,

Mouth sewed together,

Eyes wide open,

Tears of fear,

First goes; the toes,

No more tiptoeing away,

One at a time,

Sweet agonizing joy,

Drip, drip, drip,

Oh how dare you,

Dripping on the clean floor,

Second goes; phalanges and hands,

No more wandering hands,

One bone section at a time,

You did this to yourself,

Slice and dice,

Don’t cry my dear; it’s just your fears,

Third goes; feet and legs,

No more trotting away,

One slow cut at a time,

Maybe you shouldn't have ran,

Chop, chop, chop,

Don’t worry; you still look great,

Fourth goes; arms,

No more tramps wrapped in those,

One fragment at a time,

 You should have taken the first warning,

Snip, snip, snip,

What a waste of talent,

Fifth goes; your head,

No more mind games,

One big chop,

Maybe you should have thought twice.

Bye, bye, bye,

What lovely brains,

Now just to shred open you lifeless body,

Very fragile around the heart,

Ooh what a hot mess you are,

Box awaiting that shameful heart of yours,

Locked safely away inside,

Putting it to the side,

Gathering the rest of you,

One pile you go,

A light you go,

Burn baby burn,

Now all that’s left to do,

Trail off,

With you heart,

In my box,

Author's Note

It's probably odd to say, I was happy, while writing this..
Yeah, I'm not human.:p

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

Serena, this is my second review of your work and usually people I review the first time don't seem to live up to the hype the next time around...You on the other hand Serena...This is so beautifully macabre, dark, and a look into the world of madness...I would interpret this as a poem about rape and if I'm reading it right, your descriptions, your words, your perspective are so brilliantly spot on...And you comment that you were happy writing this and its no suprise when it is so exquisitely written....I am almost possitive these are the feelings that would be going through my head if I fell victim to such a disgusting crime....The scary part is this world is filled with these evil people...In any case, excellent job Serena...Keep it up

[Luke L]

Whoa scary and creepy! Good stuff :)

[khalid]

the enjoyment i felt while reading this poem led me to read it again and again. i liked every line, every word, every image. i have to thank you for writing such a great poem..

[Rob Santana]

Damn it, I should tattoo this on my arm!!!!Love it, Im a gore freak!!! Shelving this one. Great write Serena!!!!!!

[kublakhan27]

This does seem to be the kind of writing that often makes a writer happiest upon completion lol Keeping that in mind though, there is the possibility of this being interpreted as tongue-in-cheek as much as it is horrifying...it's a great piece either way, but hopefully you're okay with the possibility of that interpretation^^

[Dr. Wood ?]

we all have a dark side to us...I used to write very macabre poems when was much younger..not the happy go lucky stuff i do today....I liked this poem for that reason as well as the fact that is is very good

[Sabrina]

its like an onion with layers of meaning, deep and thoughtful, nice work

[Tai Ryens]

Sounds tasty, it would certainly make a real delicious meal for dinner! And here I thought only I engaged in random acts of cannibalism!