Bitter High

High on pain..

Meandering on a high,

Skating on a mountain,

Twisting in the sheets,

Lost in thought,

Looking for a path,

What curves I have,

Finding a way,

Wobbling as I tremble down,

Backing up time to time,

Not sure if this is how it goes,

Is this the time?

Forget get everything,

Vanish into the high,

What a dark sky this is,

Jumping from cloud to cloud,

It’s a storm warning,

Here is the path,

Dark, gray, and musky,

This is the way,

When will it clear?

Sun shinning,

Seeing as if it’s cleared up,

Cheer up a bit,

It’s just a dream you see,

Back to the dark,

What a bitter chill,

Oh what a high this is,

Reviews

[Forever Hidden]

Amazing girl!

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks.

[Rhea752]

This was full of images and they seemed to speak to me. I want to be there, it was like watching a blurry tv screen. It made you want to experience it even if it was full of misery. VERY well done!!

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thank you so much.

[Rob Santana]

what a great write suicide, you have a way with words. Kepp writing my friend.

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you.

[Tai Ryens]

Indeed, misery is almost enjoyable~
I know this by heart~

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks.

[MoriartyMesa]

This had a smokey mountain feel to it, like a group of old men with their ole guitars, singin.


Nice

[Serena Kaye]

Heh thanks.

[kublakhan27]

I don't know how to put it...this poem speaks to me, tonight it's screaming at me...awesome job^^

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you.

[afra]

very deep write ....i like it ...good work my friend

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thank you. I try.

[Dr. Wood ?]

you manage to make misery seem almost enjoyable in this,,very cleverly...Bet this didn't take long to write, it feels as if it just flowed

[Serena Kaye]

No it didn't take long.
Heh, yeah it does :p
Thanks