Farewell

I should let go..

Dead halt in my tracks,

Meandering around my mind,

No place to go,

Pondering on what to do,

Should I go?

Or should I try to stay?

Will it be worth the time?

Things I may never know,

Time after time,

Spending in my head,

I think it might be time,

Time to let it all go,

So farewell to you I say,

I shall miss you so,

So farewell,

Farewell,

Author's Note

I know it's not good, so please nothing harsh..

Reviews

[Han. <3]

i don't like how yyou've repeated the word 'go' so much.
But to be fair i'm quiet picky with that only because my spelling and punctations bad, i try to make it up with vocab. :')

but i like that you're not afraid to go deep.
Most people will be scared to show how much they've thought about this kind of thing because it comes across as attention seeking.

However the way you've portrayed is good in the sense that although you've gone dark you're not consumed with depression, you can see the light as well.

not bad kid. ;)

[Serena Kaye]

Go was symbolizing the meaning of goodbye..
Thanks a lot.(:

[Tai Ryens]

This was in no way bad; in a way, it was actually perfect!

[Serena Kaye]

Awe, thanks Ryan!

[Kent Smotherman]

C'mon, it's not bad at all! If you read enough of my criticisms you'll see a theme - I like writing that explores something and has closure. This does both - unlike Dr. Wood, I'd like to see it longer! :)

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thank you!

[Dr. Wood ?]

It's not brilliant but it aint too bad either...Could be cut a little maybe

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, yeah, I think I agree..
Thanks!

[ewest1220]

I like it! Great job!

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks, heh.

[Rhea752]

it's a good poem. i really think it is. i like it very much :)

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks you!