Wake Me

Someone just wake me up.

You still take my breath away,

Even though,

It's only a dream,

White and fluffy,

Scratch that,

It’s more like,

Dark and horrid,

Replaying it,

Over and over,

Day after day,

Tears after tears,

When will this be over?

Or does it even matter?

This night terror is eating me alive,

Someone,

Do me a favor,

And wake me,

Author's Note

I don't really know.

Reviews

[Eve]

embrace it, the pain comes from not being able to claim your own power.

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thanks.:3

[Tai Ryens]

The faint glimmer of sorrow is present in this piece, especially in the ending of it. I enjoyed this. Good job.

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks.:3

[kublakhan27]

I don't know if it was meant to be mysterious, but there is a lot of mystery in it^^

[Serena Kaye]

Ehh, so s.
Thanks for reading!

[kublakhan27]

My pleasure XD

[Kent Smotherman]

You might not know, but I do - I liked it. :) The only bit I didn't care for was the dichotomy between saying it was White and fluffy to dark and horrid - why? I think I know what you're trying to convey with that, but it seems just too out of the blue. But don't get me wrong - I really do like this one.

[Serena Kaye]

It's a twist, between what I want it to be and what it really is.
Thanks for reading!

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

the franticness and desperation in this pice leave me wanting more. Great piece!

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks!

[TheJordBaker]

really well written, the layout of the poem perfectly reflects the franticness flow. great job :)

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you! Heh..(:

[Dr. Wood ?]

well this is so much better than the last one...Great in fact....Terrific finale

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, I agree once again, thanks!

[Rhea752]

that's desperation in it's finest form. excellently written. :D

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you!(: