Perfect Two

He caused it, therefore, the perfect two..

Lost in my thoughts,

Some of you,

Yet others about my cravings,

Cravings that won’t go away,

Caused by you,

Vanishing like you did,

Thought after though,

Craving getting deeper in,

Deeper into my mind,

Why did you have to go?

This is what you have done to me,

Depressed,

With cravings,

For a cold,

Sharp,

Silver bloody blade,

Why can’t this just be a dream?

I know its crazy,

But whoever said I was sane?

Cravings have become my shadow,

You have become my nightmare,

The perfect two for me,

Author's Note

I don't really know..It just came out..

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

This is very beautiful. I know what you mean, I can totally relate to this. The best work comes from the heart. Good job!

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you. &' yeah it surely does.

[Dr. Wood ?]

some of the best ones JUST COME OUT I do believe that these are already written somewhere in the subconscious mind......They are waiting to be found

[Serena Kaye]

True, hehe, a lot of things are..
Some of the best things even are, you just never know what's in store.
Thanks..

[ewest1220]

I love the nightmare twist at the end it was a wonderful addition! Great job!

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks.

[~Sara~]

This was great. I like how you express your feelings in your writing. Good Job!

[Serena Kaye]

Heh, thank you!

[TheJordBaker]

powerful and effortless, the fact it just flowed out for you helps it. nice work :)

[Serena Kaye]

Thanks!

[Tai Ryens]

Poetry that writes itself is the best kind of poetry~

[Serena Kaye]

It sure is.

[Rhea752]

that slightly scares me. i can picture the bloody knife. great poem. Keep it up!!!!! :)

[Serena Kaye]

Thank you. Glad it scares you!!