You're Dead To Me

You're Dead To Me

A Poem by Serena Kaye

I follow you,

Yes I do,

Through it all,

You play it out so well,

Thinking you’re perfect,

Yet the day has come,

To prove how you aren’t,

Stumbling,

Whimpering,

Wishing someone would hear your calls,

Thing is I do,

Just this time around,

I’m not helping you up,

Suffer I say,

Suffer the way I did,

Maybe you’ll learn something,

Horrid thing is,

You made your way up for now,

Now you’re perfect again,

Until you feel a push,

Whoops,

My bad,

You’re down in the dirt,

Crying out loud,

Wishing you could get up,

With a foot cough in a trap,

Ropes coming from all places,

Tying you upside down,

Let this be a blood rush,

Cutting and slicing away,

Limb after limb,

Into box after box,

Shovel digging in the Earth,

Tossing the boxes in the hole of life,

Covering them up with dirt and worms,

Now all that’s left of you,

Is your small heart,

Inside a jar,

For a reminder,

That you’re dead to me, 

© 2012 Serena Kaye


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wow! you certainly went for the jugular here my girl. I can only say that for the genre it represents this is, in my opinion very startling...I sense a lot of anger...Ooh, I am beginning to sound like a real doctor....Your style is your own and from what I have read up here, quite unique....You know that I am a humour man...the other side of your coin....But this is very powerful and I bet you felt good when you completed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks! Ahh, I sure did feel a bit better, not much. Ehh, yeah there's anger.. ^_^
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

a little anger is a good thing...if channeled correctly
Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Very true.



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*caught

Very angry, saddistic , cruel
Brilliant mind you , i love teh way your characters gentle compassion has become twisted and bitter, almost like your protagonist becomes a torturer because of her own torture.
Lovely to read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Heh, weell, I tend to be that way, oops..
Thanks!
wow. that was powerful and brimming with resentment. i feel bad for whoever your angry at. great poem. Keep it up!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

No need to..(;
Thanks!
This is Brutal ;) Glad you let it all out

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Hehe, thanks.
Ah yes, there is anger, that's for sure....a lot of it! A stream of consciousness vent and you vented oh so well. My imagination took quite a ride reading this. Good work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks..
Phew! That one took me by surprise :o Loved it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
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That was intense! I can relate to this angry flow of words. Excellent poem! Well done :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thank you! ^-^
You certainly did not refrain raw emotions.
Cutting and slicing away limb after limb ♩ ♪ ♫ ♬
I am very strange, humming these two lines as a tune for a song. Ehehe, I like this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

I did the same after I read it a few times. xD It was very amusing. Sad thing was I was playing with.. read more
very powerful, you certainly let it all out! a really great poem :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks!
Wow. Very dark and deep, very powerful. Great job! I can feel anger, confusion, and thirst for revenge coming through in this poem. And in the end, it seems that the person is being pushed away by the author of this poem, perhaps for being cocky and over confident? Great poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks! And yes, anger, and revenge.. Whoops. Hehe..
Admiral Kirk

12 Years Ago

:D
wow! you certainly went for the jugular here my girl. I can only say that for the genre it represents this is, in my opinion very startling...I sense a lot of anger...Ooh, I am beginning to sound like a real doctor....Your style is your own and from what I have read up here, quite unique....You know that I am a humour man...the other side of your coin....But this is very powerful and I bet you felt good when you completed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Thanks! Ahh, I sure did feel a bit better, not much. Ehh, yeah there's anger.. ^_^
Dr. Wood ?

12 Years Ago

a little anger is a good thing...if channeled correctly
Serena Kaye

12 Years Ago

Very true.

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Added on July 17, 2012
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