Mind & Heart

Mind & Heart

A Poem by Unknown Poet

It is very easy to fool my heart
When it misses somebody alot,!

My Mind laughs at it
Because
Mind knows true words of heart goes unheard!

Still
Heart just Hurts
So
I always behave to fool My Heart
To
Maintain My Smile Always "ONN" 

© 2021 Unknown Poet


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It's interesting to describe feelings in terms of body parts. Such expression feels a little bit distanced from the body parts. "My mind laughs at my heart" is a clever & creative idea, but it feels a little standoffish, as if the narrator isn't involved. It makes for an interesting juxtaposition of "expressing feelings" and yet not really owning the feelings (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unknown Poet

2 Years Ago

Thank you valuable feedback, 😊
I was away from this for few months, missed to be here ❤�.. read more



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It's interesting to describe feelings in terms of body parts. Such expression feels a little bit distanced from the body parts. "My mind laughs at my heart" is a clever & creative idea, but it feels a little standoffish, as if the narrator isn't involved. It makes for an interesting juxtaposition of "expressing feelings" and yet not really owning the feelings (((HUGS)))

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Unknown Poet

2 Years Ago

Thank you valuable feedback, 😊
I was away from this for few months, missed to be here ❤�.. read more

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Added on November 2, 2021
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Unknown Poet
Unknown Poet

Bangalore, humanism, India



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A Poem by Unknown Poet