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I swear to uphold the past.
To piss on the future.
And to be indifferent about the present.

Is it all to f*****g inconvient for you my sweet?
Yes, gather your strength and hate me for all that you hold dear.
Finally i know that i was no small feat.
I'll cry as you finally dare hold me near.

Even in the smallest fracture of time.
I'll be there to make the bell chime.

I sit atop the tower.
Like a new gargoyle.
Waiting to lunge myself at all of the unwary.

But f**k it.
Forget it.
I'm better of alone.

Reviews

[White_lily]

Wonderful write

[ewest1220]

Wow this is so raw and once again relentless! I love this poem!

[stars are far]

great work

[LivingDeath]

A great poem of raw emotion. Straight from the heart. Thats what I think makes a poem a great poem. Very good job.

[Morrigan Nicole]

WOW? I'm speechless, the relatess and actuality of this was amazing, I loved it all the way through! Favorited.

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong beginning to the poem.
"To piss on the future.
And to be indifferent about the present."
Sometime we can win or lose in any situation. Beat to try and fail then wish and died. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote