Arise

For I shan’t forsake thee

For I shan’t forget thee

People Arise!

The world has died!

 

The end has come and it will

Not release me

The end has come and it will

Not deceive me

People Arise!

The world has died

 

The world has died out without a

Glimpse of mercy in store for me

It is all lost in my memory

People arise!

The world is dead!

Reviews

[Tattered Teddy]

Good job mate.

[Who Cares]

*whistles* Yeah this is a great piece. Your diction is perfect, I love itthere are no other words. Breath taking.

[afra]

sad but great well done

[Chesney W.]

such an incredible write. it makes you think about life after death. don't ever stop writing and always stay strong.
-The Girl Who Stays Strong

[Dayran]

This proves that there is life after death.

[Coyote Poetry]

Not a positive poem. It is direct and cold. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

This is good.

[A Risen Heroine.]

Kinda reminds me of zombies... Whatever xD
I like it.