Regarding Stacks

Kiss me

Though I don’t deserve it

It’s my only wish

 

For this has never been what either of us expected

It is fear reincarnated

 Fear of f*****g up

Fear of giving too much of myself

Yet I truly do love you

 

I will not forget the scars I’ve caused

I shall not forget the scars I’ve gotten

 

I will stand strong

Just as long

As you tell me to hang on

 

For I shall not fail you my love

For I shall not harm you my love

 

It’s all I have left

The shattering emotion of love

 

Neither you nor I can predict the future

Neither you nor I can f**k this up

 

You will never harm me

I’m stone already

 

And all I can say my beautiful rose

Is that I love you

Author's Note

Dear readers. Please let the words pass. This was for my rose. And just tell me what you think.

Reviews

[A Risen Heroine.]

I like this poem a lot, and I am glad you're with a new girl.
Keep up the work my friend.

~A Risen Heroine~

[Coyote Poetry]

"And all I can say my beautiful rose
Is that I love you"
When you are stone. Hard to find pleasure in love. Need open heart and mind to taste love and know what love is. A very good poem. Open the door to thoughts and reaction. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Dayran]

The way water comes tumbling out of a fountain is the way love comes to be expressed best sometimes. It shows us simply for the fact that we feel much .... and we hope in some way she might see just that.

[stars are far]

that was so good write..
keep that up :)

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Aww, this is real sweet and I love how you have the format and the words underlined. I've been reading some of your other work, you really do express your feelings really well. That's a great thing to do as a writer and everything. Keep up the good work :)

"And all I can say my beautiful rose
Is that I love you" ---- those two lines shine true beauty and so sweet!

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

[afra]

awww really sweet ...well done