Emptiness

This emptiness is falling

This emptiness is thrilling

This emptiness is killing

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I like this and how the size of the font changed over each line! Wonderful job indeed! Emptiness is in fact is killing and sucks to feel like that. It hurts to feel empty. So many things were thought while reading these three short lines. Again, wonderful job! :D


Ashley Rivers-- your friend ;)

[Brook Hughes]

Very short but to the point:D great work:p The text helped with the meaning of this poem:) great work

[ewest1220]

Love what you did w/ the text. Great job!

[Morrigan Nicole]

A lot said in just a few words. Yes, emptiness falls, and it falls hard. When it rains, it pours, right? The emptiness just crashes down not giving time to adjust or begin to cope. The thrilling you feel, I am sure, is sarcastic, of course emptiness is not thrilling!!!! It's down right frustrating and as you say in the last line, killing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Emptiness of many things can leave us with no place to go. Emptiness can be thrilling if on a wild road and no good to be seen in site. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Tattered Teddy]

Wow very cool concept, and oh so very true as well!