Nevermore

Seering throughout this unspectacular world

Is nothing sacred?

Isn't it all just the dream of perfection

in a sea of imperfection?

So beat on my door

Silently I look out the window

And as you fall to the floor

You become my widow

And silently I sigh as i hit the pavement

my eyes shut

but that's when i wake

from the terrifying corners

of my subconcious

violins still sounding

further and further off in my head

and a fist gets thrown

my jaw cracks

i scream in everlasting misery

for the pain that i'll always feel

and with all that's gone down

i've only grown weaker and weaker

i f**k up over and over and over

i'm what's wrong at all times

silently the strings fall from the

edges of my mind

and i forget what a simple

chord from the bards of our day

might sound like

So this is my shelter

from the rain

i did fall

but never to far

i've always kept

on fighting

Am i done for?

Nevermore

Nevermore

sounds from the mouth of a street w***e

the sheath of paper breaks

the pen cracks

and the words echoes

throughout

this hollow house

one by

one

the simple

pieces fit so easily together

everyhting simply takes

away the thought so you

simply don't

have to feel the same

Red fills the page

and suddenly i am defeated

we are all forgotten

Reviews

[ewest1220]

Quite well done, I really like the power you put in your words here. Every word has a purpose and there are no detractions or distractions from your message. Great job my friend!

[Justin Flume]

Thanks E.
That's means a lot coming from you.

[LivingDeath]

Just when you think its done; you scroll down, and BOOM! theres more lol Very good job, my friend. I liked the last line the most "we are all forgotten". Many meanings could come from just that one line depending on how the reader interpreted it at the time. Very good job.
~LivingDeath

[stars are far]

that was so well written..
great poem :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line could be true. Life lead us to many places. The set-up was interesting. Life is a hard journey. A wise person know how to get up and never quit fighting. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[FallenHeroXx]

I MEAN IT!?!?!

[FallenHeroXx]

This is really good. I enjoyed the s**t out of this!

100/100

Keep this the f**k up man

[White_lily]

A very emotionel poem.. keep up the good work