Angel Love

hope you'd like it..

My wait has come to an end,
My tears are now dry,
You're back in my life,
Now I just don't need to cry.

Its been so long,
Since we met last time,
I need you with me,
To make my words rhyme.

I had silent feelings,
For you my dear,
I regret not telling you,
For not making them clear.

But you are here with me,
Again to hold my hand,
Spreading happiness and joy,
And making my world grand.

You are my Angel love,
You are the beats of heart,
You are the one for whom,
My breath ends and starts!!

Reviews

[armin]

I can feel the desire in the poem.
I liked the given phrase,

But you are here with me,
Again to hold my hand,
Spreading happiness and joy,
And making my world grand.

Hopeful wordings.
Well done.

armin ....

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

thank You Mate

[nazia]

Romantic.. Made me feel like falling in love.. great write Amulya :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

aww... that's sweet of u... Thank You Dear!!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

how sweet innocent and honest.....................

"Its been so long,
Since we met last time,
I need you with me,
To make my words rhyme. "

beautiful......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thanks A lot Sir... :) m glad u loved it...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Arre Sir mat bolo yaar................i am just a beginner like you........
you are welcome!!! :) :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

haha... oky oky... ;)

[R Smith]

Bravo!! Amulya a perfect love poem to the one of your desire, if its a real affair then my best wishes to you both, if its just a story then you have achieved a work of art :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

thaaank you sir!! you're words gave the perfect end to my day... ^__^

[R Smith]

Then I am so pleased to have done so :)

[Jamestown]

Very sweet sentiment! I so enjoy reading people's happiness,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

thanks alot sir!! your words mean a lot! :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

thanks alot sir!! your words mean a lot! :)

[The Dark Knight]

wow... too gud!! loved it.. its always great to read u

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thanks a lot deah!! you're words are always so encouraging...

[The Dark Knight]

i have to repeat myself the same thing always.. its ur work which makes me praise u..

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

aww.. thank you sir!!