DEATH

What is death??

To lay lifeless
On well arranged woods
Stepping towards oblivion
Leaving all sighs and goods

Is it the true death?
Of almighty's creation?
From the records of living men
One's name's deletion?

Or death is something much
More deeper than this?
Ain't it the crying of soul?
Or dying hope's last kiss?

Ain't that person dead
Who is left all alone?
In this crowded world
In lonliness who has drown?

Hadn't that person died
Who lacks moments of joy?
Whose life's joyful pages
Are burnt before he could compile?

Death is not just the end
Instead a decaying journey
In which all dreams,
Wishes and emotions flee!!!

Reviews

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

Loneliness can be truly worse than death, I do always believe a person can be born into this world alone, but he should never die lonely. This poetry has a sync with that and hence I'm able to appreciate it from the deep. DEEP!!!

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thanks a lot mate ^_^

[R Smith]

how very true Amulya, indeed life can become a living death in the eyes of the lonely and those who hope's and dream's are dashed by seeming cruel fate, is fate cruel i don't believe so, i'm a believer of karma but its a hard task master to bear, lovely writing Amulya, so much to think about :)

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

THANKS ALOT SIR!! I feel great by ur words! :)

[R Smith]

you will always be welcome Amulya, i'm so pleased by your liking my work and the feeling is returned by me for your writing :)

[Stephen]

Very deep!! This one makes you really think about life and makes you reconsider how you live it. Thanks for sharing

[Amulya Bhardwaj]

Thank Your So Much sir!!