Broken Heart

Read it, like it, love it, hate it, I don't care. I wrote this with nobody specific in mind, I now have someone who this applies to. His name is Ronnie.

I was lost,

You found me.

 

My heart was broken,

You put it back together.

 

I loved you,

You loved me.

 

I kissed you,

You kissed me.

 

I gave you my heart,

You tore it apart.

 

I shed a tear,

You walked away.

 

 

 

Reviews

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simple and yet profound...i know exactly how you feel

[Liam]

This was such a good poem because of it's simplicity and structure, well done. I'd like to read more poems like that!

[MandarinOranges]

Raw. To the point. Well put together. All of these things and so much more. I can actually feel the heart breaking when I read this. Good job!!

[jumbie's #1 fan]

very simple and well said. love it lots. This seem like something I would write about lol lol.