Haiku

My first haiku... Decided to give it a try!

Rainbow attitude

Concrete thoughts, so sure of you

Personality

Author's Note

Not sure if it makes any sense... Any thoughts?

Reviews

[Roland Petrov]

Makes sense to me! Personality is composed of thoughts and attitude, is it not? And isn't it a mixture of rainbow and concrete? Of course it is!

[Talismanic]

Interesting...it has a really nice sound:) I've found traditional Haikus to have very strict criteria, but this is a strong poem in its own right. It expresses very deep connotations through the precise words and rhythm, and leaves a lot of room for interpretation.