Wanted

Wanted

A Poem by Juliet
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-- this is purely fictional btw.

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I look up, above my glasses and gaze toward you. 
All of these things, running through my mind, 
Fatiguing my heart, wearing down on it's strength 
And you are untoucheable. 

Though, We sit and speak with each other, 
Day after day, friendship growing and all the while
Knowing that you are so much of what I need. 
I can't help thinking it may work out in the end. 

Drinks, 
Conversations, 
More possibly, and
Just maybe, 
I'll sell you my paintings. 

© 2012 Juliet


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This is very intriguiging and it draws the reader into the scenario completly, and the endig leaves the reader wondering. Pondering if there is more to come or if this was just some small glimpse at one event. I liked this piece and cant wait to see what comes next.

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MrV
Very interesting. I like it quite a bit. Even if it is purely fictional, there's a personal level thing going on with it and me.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


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thank you for sharing this i don't see any mistakes well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Such are "dreams". I listened BECAUSE of your drawing and making it real. Well said.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very intriguiging and it draws the reader into the scenario completly, and the endig leaves the reader wondering. Pondering if there is more to come or if this was just some small glimpse at one event. I liked this piece and cant wait to see what comes next.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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