So Many Feelings

Neo-celtic expansion of the innermost ramblings of a worker drunk on the job. Ignore this. It's nothing.

Kept you off my mind 

For quite a while I'd say.

Obviously it wasn't 

Long enough though 

Or you wouldn't be 

In this poem, 

On this mind, 

Or inside my brain.

I just want to be near you

Not even speak to you,

Just hear you talk. 

I just want to touch you. 

Not even hold you,

Just bump into you on the street.

You're worth all this time that I've wasted

And so much more than I expected, 

But I'm clearly not worth yours. 

Why do I waste all of this time 

When I'm far from YOUR thoughts,

In your poems, 

On your mind, 

Or inside your brain?

Perhaps I'm a fool,

But I can't help what I feel.  

Reviews

[Juliet]

No. he was literally never mine.

[BabyBluee]

loved it : ) again I love the last two lines, so true...and let me just add, he isnt worth your time cuz in the last poem u said something like he wasnt urs to begin with (Im assuming hes cheated?) and if thats so then no he is not worth your time, you deserve better : )

[Chris]

makes a person wish the letter was for them sometimes...

[K.C. Zbryk]

Loss and longing are conveyed perfectly in this piece. The painful wants that people feel when they miss someone are perfectly worded. The way you plainly state your desires makes this painful. The last line is the perfect ending for this. None of us can ever help how we fell. Thats part of humanity.

[Pratik]

Well written....you have brought out the pathos and the yearning very well...I specially liked the way you took off at the beginning.. nice one.. :)