Lambi loves

Lambi loves

A Poem by Juliet
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Enough said.

"
Expanding quickly
My adoration for you;
And you're like a ghost.
I search for you now,
But you hide your face from me.
Never intended
The anger you feel
toward me and I try to
apologize, but
You won't give the time
That it might take to forgive
And let love flourish. 
Well, that's fine cos' I
Didn't need you anyway,
I just wanted you. 
I still do, but that
Won't ever change a thing, dear. 
Such a strange feeling
And of you I can't
Get enough to satisfy
The longing I feel. 

© 2011 Juliet


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Its always painful when someon we care for no longer feels the same. This piece is nice because it has a very sincere feel to it, and its almost as if the authoor is just stating a fact instead of harboring resentment. But it also has a heartbreaking undertone of rejection, and loss. It makes the reader feel for the speaker.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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We say and do so many things
and never think of the tones...

You've come a long way Kath.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Not harboring resentment, I'm just sad that I've hurt someone unintentionally and it ruined everything. :/ They don't want me anymore over something I said, ended pretty damn badly. It was a bad reaction to what was supposed to be playful banter. I never meant to cause any harm, just get their attention.

Fail troll is fail.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its always painful when someon we care for no longer feels the same. This piece is nice because it has a very sincere feel to it, and its almost as if the authoor is just stating a fact instead of harboring resentment. But it also has a heartbreaking undertone of rejection, and loss. It makes the reader feel for the speaker.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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