Still writing about you.

it's fucked the way that 

you picked up and moved on 

with your life and our plans

as if i were never a part of anything.

how could you make that kind of love 

knowing you may --

and as I later discovered would --

choose never to see me again? 

Reviews

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Human relationship can be sometimes hell. We gave each other promises and trust. But time will always show who we really are. Sometimes we are the one who is bad. I like your straight look into problem. You don't running from it. You just show what was wrong. And ask simple question. You will not see me again? Very strong statement on the end. Well done.

[Nicole]

I like this. I relate to it a lot right now. When I finished it it gave me that pause i always looking for when i read stuff like this. Where it causes me to sit there a moment, pausing, allowing the familiar feeling to splash over me. Sometimes in those moments a memory sometimes flashes by...
very good. i like it.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Julie have you seen the movie letters to juliet? You words are really beautiful and expressive.

[PhoenixDown]

Hello nail, my name is hammer.

Raw & true. Brave.
Bravo.

[I Am Svetlana]

Love is very powerful and intoxicating. Sadly, some don't deserve such a precious love.

[Juliet]

love does that to a person. i'm only writing out what I feel.

thanks for the review.

[613]

I feel your pain - sadness & anger - in this. It's very powerful. Nicely done.

- Brittney