wanting to stay broken

Somewhere along the way everything I knew

slid out of place, out of line, and it all seemed so broken. 

there was no rhyme or reason other than life just happens, 

no stopping it and we all have to adjust 

whether we like it or not. 

I suppose we all saw this coming

this inevitable break in my stride,

fall to my knees and finally crying for something, 

anything to keep me from being lead off

into the night and astray once and for all. 

What was so wrong about my wanting to make you better? 

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

Very deep and affecting anxiety...
You must be an artist..doomed to suffer some in life..I say that because I can sense a real torture in your soul on this one.
Very well done...
Scott

[pinhead07]

Relatable, deep, true; took me another place in time.

[joey]

love... i wonder how you could say this in your art

[Juliet]

how I could say what in my art?

[joey]

all those emotions in just the imagery of painting... how would it look

[Juliet]

I actually addressed this exact subject in one of my paintings.

[joey]

i almost knew you would :) would love to see that

[Juliet]

I'll link you! c: