That Man

Can someone tell me
Who that man may be?
Once we were so close
Now he's a stranger to me
How did that man get to this place?
He once had such big dreams
But now I see the failure in his face
Can someone please make it clear?
Somebody please tell me
Who is that man in the mirror?

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

Well done. Everybody wonders this at some point in their life. You have captured it well.

[Alan G Stephens]

Ah, The Man In The Mirror! What an excellent delve into that man we can not escape from. "He once had such big dreams,
But now I see the failure in his face"
Who is he. Is it a tue reflection or just a trick of the light?
I've seen him before in better days and sometimes catch a glimmer of his smile but as your poem expresses so clearly, hopelessly and emotionally; we're not the man we thought we would be.
Loved your poem, really.

[Mr.Writer]

Great job! Keep it up! This was amazing! I thoroughly enjoyed it all! Wow... you write amazing! Emotional... engaging... beautiful... powerful piece!

[APOORVA]

The burden of heart reflects here.
I am so amazed about the beauty of this piece.
Awesome

[Sindolly]

I feel this like a ton of adult bricks hanging off my heart.