Discontent

Words left unspoken
Things I want to say
Memories that haunt me
Each and everyday
Want to scream out loud
Let my discontent be known
Make the Gods hear the anger
And agony in my tone
These trials and tribulations
Quickly grow old
Leaving me hollow
And my heart so cold
I need someone to save me
To melt away the ice
Put me back together
Now wouldn't that be nice?

Reviews

[APOORVA]

Heart break ?
thoroughly enjoyed each letter, each word and each sentence of yours...majorly each emotion you transcribed out here

[LKBillips]

Good Rhythm and great feeling behind it. I could see my own demons beckoning my to the brink with this one. Nicely done.

[Sindolly]

Yes! Let the vibration ring through the universe until it takes notice!