Things to Say

Things to Say

A Poem by The Unforgiven
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So many things I want say
But you leave me simply tongue-tied
Several attempts to speak
So many times I've tried

It would be so easy to fall so completely
I can almost feel the vertigo set it
It seems so frightening
I never thought i could feel this again

That smile on your face
Could brighten the most dreary day
You leave me simply tongue-tied
So many things I want to say

© 2017 The Unforgiven


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This is perfectly complete. :) and oh the things we don't say, the thoughts and words we keep in,not knowing if it's right, right time right place, ight decision. Funny to think when things just flow out how you didn't even have to think about it, but somethings just..get stuck in the road between your heart,mind and mouth sometimes. Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Yes. We do often feel like this. Sometimes we lack words and sometimes even we have a script to say in our mind we choose not to. Very well expressed your feelings. I liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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