Thoughts

Thoughts come and go
Like smoke rings in the dark
Where do I fit in
Just what the hell is my part
To play in this game
Am I just a pawn?
Pondering on this
As night fades into dawn

Questions left unanswered
So much needs to be said
I hear them constantly
Over and over in my head

Dear God
Can you hear me scream?
Or do you choose to ignore me
I'm talking to myself it seems
What am I doing here
Except earning my place in hell
Do you even f*****g exist
Or am I just chasing my tail?

Reviews

[APOORVA]

one of my favorite poems I have ever read on this site.
such strong perception, such strong expression and such strong observation of life...wow!!
i super liked it