Lunar Influance

This is just the first poetic liturature I made, a friend reintroduced me to poetry a week ago, so I thought I'd take a crack at it hope you enjoy!

just thought if let my thoughts flow, like a river that spits into the ocean an endless orthodox of emotion passing each moment wondering why?

What happened to the people I used to drift close too? so close but torn apart instantly each love teaches a life lesson but my hearts stressing, I can feel my flow thicken. My waters getting cold lonely and forbidden

Before I knew it my liquid was solid the free flow of emotion cut off at the ocean, my water is frozen my beautiful river degraded to a mere stream but the water is still flowing my waters still flowing!

Even though it feels the sharp sting of the cold even though its been poisoned by the unorthodox intention by those Iv drift close to.

It just keeps on flowing while growing from the experiences it possesses,
Hardened but still moving in the right direction.

Till new waters clashed in an unexpected fashion, two forces controlled by the law of attraction,

the Cupid shot his arrow and lit the eternal fires of passion, burning wildly my waters not frozen gentle calm and composed now,

But it only last for a moment, the water is going, cuz it was never here to stay in the first place. So I wonder if it was real, or just convenient that moment my waters are moaning but at least now they are open

Open with great waves of emotion waiting for the change of the tides, my waters are clean so now I can see clearly there were really no bad times, just times I needed learning, some lessons learnt quick others took time

stuck like waters trapped in a gut.
But I slipped out quite quickly friends are still spinning, while I am just thinking,
hey I was never where I thought I was at the time..
I was never frozen or poisoned, I was not a river or a stream I was always keen and open, I knew what I was doing before it was done, I put myself through hell just to say it was fun.

And with this new thought sparked a great truth like the stars and the son aligned with the moon. A smile in my heart that could never be gone, My soul is open cuz now I know, I was always the ocean

Author's Note

Try to ignore grammar and punctuation please :)

Reviews

[Unfit902]

Thank you I really don't know much technique I just enjoy putting emotion on paper, that was my first poetic literature, but Iv wrote a fair amount of music

[Lonesome Traveler]

Lovely stream of consciousness style about it, which in my opinion is such an under used technique.