Broken

Read this people and maybe you too could relate to this

He left her with shattered dreams

But a ray of hope was left behind as well

Now they were seen in two different teams

And her life had turned into hell

He say we will be friends forever

She only agreed saying,"Okay"

A flashback began in her head of all the moments spent together

She loved him deeply but never could ask him to stay <3

Reviews

[Joey Nizz]

Wonderful, honest and deep.
Well done Yanya, I like this one :)

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much :) Thankyou

[Joey Nizz]

You are every much welcome ^^
Glad to find words i can relate too

[Tanya Ramsail]

And with your poems i can relate as well

[Joey Nizz]

I'm glad that you do.

[Re-Pete]

a good expression of sad feelings. very honest. keep writing.

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much... i am really glad you liked it ☺

[KT-B]

This is vey clever Tanya, look forward to reading more of your work :)

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much it really means a lot :)

[Hebe]

Simple and very expressive Tanya...

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much :)

[APOORVA]

nice.
good attempt, keep up

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much :)

[Najam Us Saher]

It hit me hard. Beautifully expressed your emotions. Loved it.

[Tanya Ramsail]

Thankyou so much

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)