Forsaken

I wade in the depth
Of life...

Wondering how a soul

Could be so alone

When swimming through a

constant sea

Of bodies?

 

Searching for that

*Special*

That fills the most desolate

void,

Comforts the coldest night,

Defines the virtue

Of trust.

 

Wide eyes

Mock my heart-

Open to the perversion

And wickedness

Of them all-

Ready to bleed out

this

                   forsaken

                              destiny.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW that first stanza just wrapped itself around me and pulled me in.... amazing... I so understand this piece...I do... keep em coming love !!!

[Uneek]

Thanks girlfriend :)

[star73]

I love poetry just started getting into its so cool there's so much you can do I love the poem I would like it if you could review some of my poems please and thank you I just started this website im pretty new.

[Uneek]

Id love to, and thanks for your review! Im glad you liked it. :)

[Jennie Baron]

Yep, many of us have been there, alone in the crowd. I tried to express it in poetry but in terms of hope. You did better than I at capturing the feeling in the moment rather than the future, that moment when it's pretty hard to find hope.

[Uneek]

Exactly Jennie! I was feeling pretty hopeless when it comes to the human race at that point in time.