Any Dolt With Half a Brain...

Dr. Horrible for the win!!!

Any dolt with half a brain,

Can see this poor, evil man will go insane.

To the extent, I do not know

Or even where he'll go

If his mind becomes so inhumane.

Listen close to the screaming from the school,

Eight year olds gone askew.

Hear them burning

Below their beating hearts.

Beats never to resume.

I cannot believe my eyes.

A girl, just about her size.

She's named Penny,

and she's burning in from of me.

I can hear her cries.

Author's Note

Constructive criticism welcome!

Reviews

[Laura S-C]

Wow this is a very interesting poem. It creates quite a realistic picture. Well done.