Immortal Truth Of Never Letting Go...

Immortal Truth Of Never Letting Go...

A Poem by UnderTheCarpet
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Forever has a meaning...

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 When life meets choice and love meets sun, then there is a reason for tries. 

 Reason for once opening eyes and realizing that world is not like it used to be.  
No matter what direction it is poiniting to, different.  
Matrix is renamed.  
Reality is done forever.  
... dreams,  thoughts, soul are awaken.  
With one sound of beat understanding that desire of being here is stronger than ever.  Why?  
The reason is present now.  
No matter how hard it was to reach it, how many drops were needed to fill the cup of time, how many signs were left after... 
It's here. 
 Covering pale foundation of your mask with bright natural smile... 
 Shine...  
I found it once and till infinity.
Love. 
It's a saving, never ending book of feeling.  
Battleship grey... present within a beat...sound of faint...melody of us.
Yes, i think about it.  Understanding is found.
One soul that means more than universe.
One immortal  truth of never letting go.
Melin le, i whisper in language  of the unknown.
Life met choice and love met sun.  
The book is started, and the ending will be happy...
Why?
There will be no ending.  <3
 
        P.S I love you :***** 

© 2009 UnderTheCarpet


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wow .. i love this .. totally feel it

Posted 14 Years Ago


:))) thx u guys:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I get the message. I really like how it was delivered in the poem. Its is well written and that is some good work. Well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a well written piece. I like where you are going with this and the fact you keep the same voice through out is good. The format is excellent and the style i like. Great Job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this. It's well-written. I like the format of your poem. It really works for this. Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 15, 2009

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I was totally normal, until idea hit my head:) Hey, my name is Moey. There is nothing extra special about me, except abilities to fly a broom and read minds:) I love writing, and in future want to .. more..

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