God Loves You

True story about a unbeliever friend who is broken inside.

Behind the bathroom door you’re crying

And I hate it

I don’t know why you’re doing it

You never tell me

You’re broken and empty inside

And you’re killing me

With all this secrecy

You’re always reapplying makeup to those

Watery crying eyes

And staring into that mirror

I don’t know why

You’re beautiful

You should know that

But you don’t and

It’s killing me

And I hate it

I’m afraid someone is hurting you

With words they shouldn’t say

Something deep inside

Is eating your soul away

I hate when you talk of dying

Of suicide and hell

Because I want you to stay alive

And know there’s a heaven

You’re beautiful

You’re moving away to someplace

I wish I could go with you

But just know that I love you

And that

God loves you.

He can save you.

He loves you.

 

Author's Note

Unedited, of course. I know it's super repetitive, but this is another kind of "writing frenzy." Just wrote what I felt. This girl really needs help, and I can't give it to her anymore cause she's leaving. I think I will give this to her.

Reviews

[MusicLover]

You should totally give this to her. I love it well done. :)

[Ink Angel]

This is so sad, I can relate to this with a family member its hell to go through. I hope she get help, she needs to know she not alone. This is a truly wonderful heartfelt write. Thank you for sharing.

[Ramya]

Wonderful poem!

[Brittany]

I think you did a good job with this. I like that you express your feelings in this way. Maybe try some punctuation?

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. In a long life. We must help someone and we may need help. I like the ending to the poem. Sometime someone who cared and is near can repair a bad situation. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Whiskurz]

This is Beautiful, and I think giving her this would be a great idea......Whisk

[Kuhr Gred]

:) wow.. i like it...:D KEEP IT UP ;)
- Kuhr Gred

[Pax]

your such a caring friend. just go and give it to her as a reminder that you and god cared. u can tell her that there is more to life than dying. Life suck sometimes but it gets better as you do the things you love.

[Cathy Wattam]

What a heartrending poem. So sad to see the friends we love struggling like this. You have captured the sentiments of the piece really well. Everyone at some point in their lives needs a good friend but often just pushes everyone away. Sometimes, you just have to accept that you can't help some people, no matter how much you want to and how much you try. Just letting her know how you feel might just help a little. You'll never know unless you try. Good luck.

[eeoopig]

nice poem, sad though