Confused

A personification poem about struggle.

I whisper, I scream, I cry, confused

I am struggle,

Your tear stained cheeks,

The sweat sliding down your face

The rope burns on your wrist

I weaken, I kill, I craze, confused

I am your strain,

The aching in your arms

The heft on your back

The murder of elation

I weep, I shriek, I moan, confused

I am your constriction,

The clutch on your neck,

I dwell in your soul

Collapse, satisfy, and reward my effort

Though I cannot comprehend how you conquest

I am a worker to weaken, never strengthen

I attempt, I fail, I conquest, confused

But only God destroys me

For he is the triumph, the win

I whisper, I scream, I cry, confused

Author's Note

this is kind of disjointed, it could use some work. Any tips would be helpful.

Reviews

[emman]

Emotional! :)

[MusicLover]

I think it is amazing.