The Final Battle

On such a beautiful day
I have so many words to say
Unreal like a dream
In which a dark shadow appear

It talks,silent words
That can enchant all world
But we are the ones that can see beneath it
With our shiny armor and swords we can beat it

For our thoughts,there is he,he comes
To watch us struggle,trick us,play with our bones
But we must be strong,because the battle is near
And the sounds of fight,there it is,I can hear

Come my friends,come and see,but not only to see
You must pick what you want to be
Are you with the Dark and his manipulative mind
Or with the Light,that will win at the end of time

Oh and the fire,oh there it is
He is angry as a hungry beast
A dragon with the giant wings
He came to fight all his fears

And I am watching it,he raised
But with me is a whole army
Of angels,and the God has upraised
To jostle the Evil for the last time
To bring  the freedom to all empty minds

The Evil is strong,yet it fell
In the giant hole without an end
There it will burn,like in Hell
While the God came down on the land

And now I am standing with the proud
And with all my friends now I bow
To my only Lord,king of the Light
He shine in all his glory and it makes me feel safe
After I've seen the darkness in it's full might

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

So glad you wanted me to read this! Firstly I"m going to over protective when that time comes :) And I'll be at your side,well more infront hehe.But I really like this it's beautiful May the lord be at your side as long as time it self :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you for reading it and thank you for your comment :)

[rnuff]

Are you with the Dark and his manipulative mind
Or with the Light,that will win at the end of time

love these lines here, This is a pretty amazing write.

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you :)

[Andrew N. Farrens]

that is damned good.......seriously.
Res Ipsa Loquitur

[MOON]

lovely write and flow conquer it all.

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Does it have to be the final battle. 100/100

[Blue Ivory]

This actually inspired me to write my own version =) Throughout our entire conversation, I knew I would end up writing a poem about this. I should've known you were thinking the same :P When I saw you publish it, I told myself, I should start writing then. This was a great way to express yourself. Especially the ending