Bloody Mary

Bloody Mary

Drifting faces
Miracle vases
Full of flowers in pain

Tables are turning
Like ashes burning
Making me cut my veins

Screaming with rage
Blood is droping all over my page
And the words appear

The ones I see
The best would be
If they could dissapear

But they are shinging
Wet but dry and I start crying
As something is trying my spirit to steal

And on the window a dark shadow appear
It seems like a nightmare or the worst dream

And the sign of Bloddy Marry will leave

Author's Note

what do you think?

Reviews

[Rose of Gondor]

Scary. :D I've never tried to play the game "Bloody Mary" and I don't plan to any time soon. Too scary....

Lovely write! Dark and tragic.

[Octob3r Star]

I f*****g love rage. I love this write. Very awesome! Cheers :)

[Mockingbird]

dark and tragic. sounds like her suicide is all thought out. sad.

[Bare trees]

I thought it was good and I like the first stanza. The last stanza was a bit confusing and you spelled boody mary different then the title and that threw me off.

shinging? do you mean shining?

[Maria.F.T]

What a scary poem !

[Muse]

Ouch your picture and words inspire a bloody mess. lol
Very artistic. Very dark...my style of writing.

[Roe]

i really like this write