Dark Love

 I am walking within shadows of your kiss
Where your enchanting eyes are making me stay
I am drowning in a memory that I still miss
But there is no helping hand along shattered way

Can a little blood make my wish come true
Or I'll burn down if I get out on the sun
The night is silently coming out of blue
Can you come along within and we'll run

We can run into the arms of freedom
We can gloriously embrace the rise of dawn
Lying together still and without a sound

It's a hollow hole this thing we call life
Every happiness is just a lie, so let's put away
Our thorns, my rose, as we slip into the night

Reviews

[Chandler bing]

One of the best i have read in recent times keep it up!

[Wórdsmíth]

We can run into the arms of freedom
We can gloriously embrace the rise of dawn
Lying together still and without a sound

Wow .. beautiful lines and the whole poem`s so amazingly written. I enjoyed it! ;)

[theartistichands]

Very nice and I liked the way you started the poem ...."I am walking within shadows of your kiss, Where your enchanting eyes are making me stay."

[A. Amos]

nice and beautiful thanks for sharing

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Why did you write this in purple?? Hehe I would think dark love should have been written in bold black,with red here and there :) I love the opening because I could relate to it, walking within the shadows of your kiss reminding me of the days after a very romantic tenderly kiss. :)) Nice choice of bringing vampiresm it helped formed the piece exponentially!! The night is silent coming out of the blue- had to think abt this and I remembered watching out my window in the early dusk,the sky is actually blue :) what a beautiful picture you've presented here,very attractive and well detailed!! I enjoyed this you write very well!! Keep up the fabulous work :) I love It!!

[-Scribe in Style-]

a different type of beautiful.. wrapped in the darkest of night..
"Every happiness it just a lie" - this is the best line..
Your poem is full of emotion and really touching..

[Joiedevivre]

dark love indeed! very moody and romantic, a bit nostalgic.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Can a little blood make my wish come true
Or I'll burn down if I get out on the sun
The night is silently coming out of blue
Can you come along within and we'll run

We can run into the arms of freedom
We can gloriously embrace the rise of dawn

Those lines give much to the reader...the questions asks...giving time to answer them...and the way you end the piece:

Every happiness is just a lie, so let's put away
Our thorns, my rose, as we slip into the night

[Alexx Wake]

This was touching! I very much adored every aspect of this poem.. good job! :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you! :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Very nice written, interpretation, the poem could be used to ask a spirit to manifest inside a person, and when we are done with that person we can push that person to hell, then ask again that spirit to manifest on another person and start all over again, Did I get it right?