Human

I saw the pain, the tears imperceptible
Alienated from your face,
And then smile
As the sun when it shines in winter
Metamorphosis of the face, but his eyes
Those eyes always stay the same
In them is hiding another world
Beyond the fireworks and the scene
Behind the tears and sadness
Behind the long loneliness
There is a man
The man who just wants love

Reviews

[-Scribe in Style-]

The eyes never lie... They are the path to the inside. And what the eye says never changes.. This is an excellent pieces. It truly brings out the emotion and a facade of what a person hides when they show face. One hides themselves behind fake smiles... On should not smile so much that the tears are that much more visible.

[Dr. Wood ?]

yes...The windows to the soul...well described

[UnderCompulsion]

thank you :)

[Rahul]

The last four lines're well penned and damnly expressed. I liked this way of writing and coloring's great as well...nicely penned. your words're powerful indeed and the way of writing, the way of thinking in so deep's incredible to me...because i just want to even i always love to read such kinda a nice and smooth piece's which contains and shows the depth of reality...as you did.

great write. you deserve to get this 95/100

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you very much. Reviews like this always means a lot to me.

[Emrick]

Hello. What does the title "Human" mean here?.I cant find something common in the title and in the theme.

[UnderCompulsion]

Hello! Human means human as a noun,a man, a person that we all are, no matter what are we like on the outside, on the inside all we want is love