A Girl In the Corner

Dedicated to a boy from a school...

Verse 1
I am watching you,your pretty face is sad again
Another girl left you standing in the rain
But I can be the one who will give your heart a break
Ohh ohh I can take your pain away,take it..take

Chorus
But I am just another girl in the corner
Looking at you as you´re passing by
Trying so hard to catch your eye
Dreaming that one day you'll say hi
But I am just another girl in the corner
Asking myself why,why,why won't you love me

Verse 2
Yesterday I saw you smile for the first time
I guess your pain has gone away,´cus it's been a while
Since you were joking and fooling around
And all I did was watch you from all the way down

Chorus
Because I am just another girl in the corner
Looking at you as you´re passing by
Trying so hard to catch your eye
Dreaming that one day you'll say hi
But I am just another girl in the corner
Asking myself why,why,why won't you love me

Bridge
Sometimes I think that...no,but that can't be true
But sometimes I feel like maybe you like me too
But then I shake it off,put up a smile and stay in that dream for a while
Because sometimes I know,that you´re looking at me so why,why,why
Can't you see me perfectly fine as I see you

Chorus
I am just another girl in the corner
Looking at you as you´re passing by
Trying so hard to catch your eye
Dreaming that one day you'll be mine
But I am just another girl in the corner
Asking myself why,why,why won't you love me

Is that so hard to do
To give me a chance to prove
That I am the right for you...

Reviews

[emipoemi]

This is song is so beautiful! I could feel the rhythm and melody of it as I read/sang along! I have the urge to make a recording of it (despite the strange factor that I'm male), but that's how this song made me feel! Well done!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

With lyrical verses...seeing the words is much different without the music...but I see here you're talking about love...in the last line I believe you wanted to say:

Is that so hard to do
To give me a chance to prove
That I am the right for you...
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Is that so hard to do
To give me a chance to prove
That I am the right one for you...

[Carl Drake Barnard]

its the construct friend,a writer leaves words out for a purpose in a poem.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Some reviewers doesn't read between the lines they just read and adore their badges,This is painful,i know the feeling seeking seeing and believing all to be mis treated. You love and want to be loved but no one sees,your just you in their eyes,some would glo in your way some would just walk away. But believe me when a friend does not touch,doesn't love at you and doesn't mistreat you it means he loves you. Grait poem-feelings-position your in- everything :)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you so much on your words and your review :))

[Carl Drake Barnard]

always my plesure :)

[Holly Mason]

great flow loved reading thank you for sharing

[rnuff]

wow, this is really good, Wonderful flow.

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you!

[Muse]

Did you share this him? What a gift!

[UnderCompulsion]

No,I didn't. But thank you for your review :)

[Blue Ivory]

I love this! I really really just simply LOVE this! I so wish I could hear you sing it! And is this about somebody new? If not, write the letter this person's name starts with ;)

[UnderCompulsion]

Thank you! :) Yeah it is about somebody new.I'll tell you about him ;)

[Blue Ivory]

OK!

[Dr. Wood ?]

all you need now is a guitar