Numb

this poem was a mixture of 3 of my friends and my issuses and our feelings.

You know it bad when u can't stop thinking
When your thoughts are irrational
When everything hurts
When you can't stop shaking
When nothing makes since
When you can't remember
When you can't figure it out
When nothing makes since
You know it's bad when you can't stop thinking

You know it's bad when everything look the same
When everything is spinning in circles
When you can't stop crying uncontrollably
When you can think no longer
When your cold though you should be warm
You know it's bad when everything looks the same

You know it's bad when your numb
When you can't feel
When all you can do is feel
Feel other peoples pain over yours
Feel the troubled thoughts of the world
Feel the since of insecurity that rests below the surface
Feel the unjust in actions
Feel the confusion reaching the surface
You know it's bad when your numb

You know it's bad when you can feel all this but not feel what's going on with you
What's happening to you
What people are doing to you
What people are making you feel
What people are making you choose
What people are making you do
What's happened to you?
You know it's bad when you can't see what you've become

You know it's bad when your hiding
Hiding in public
Hiding lies
Hiding truths
Hiding trust
Hiding love
Hiding life
Hiding you
You know it's bad when you look in the mirror and don't recongive the face that looks back at you

You know when it's bad
But you still don't know what wrong
But you still don't know how to fix it

Reviews

[LetMeLaughLetMeSing]

Wow. This is really, really good. Intense.... wow............ wow.