Captured Hearts

Hands Tremor

Mind Sparks

Promising Lies

This Blade In My Hand

This Broken Butterfly In My Mind

This Broken Promise Made Of Lies

I Can't Help Myself

I'll Stand And Watch This World Fall

People Praise

Tell Me I'm Smart

Tell Me I'm Thoughtful And Kind

Tell Me I Have A Talent For Writing

Tell Me I'm Better Than The Fools Who Call Me Scum

Tell Me I'm Your Precious Little Baby

I'm Smart So I Slice

I'm Thoughtful And Kind So I Pretend It's Not Your Fault

I Have A Talent For Writing So Why Can't I Find The Word's Anymore

I'm Better Than The Fools So That's Why They Hate Me

I'm Your Precious Little Baby So Why Dose It Feel Like You Don't Care

Please Tell Me What The F**k Is Wrong With Me

Doctor, Doctor I Can't Breath There Suffocating Me

Feel Like Jumping And Saying Goodbye

Don't Know Where The Time Went

Closed My Eyes For Second

But Your Still Gone

Like A Dream I Never Had

Doctor, Doctor I Think I Know

He's Laughing On The Sidelines

Amused By My Self Destruction

He Used To Hold Me And Smile With Me

I Thought He Would Stay

Thought He Would Fly With Broken Wings

To Hold My Hand Through It All

But He Doesn’t Know Because He Doesn’t Care

Paper Scribbles And Ink Tears

Here's My Message Hold It Close

With Loving Scars And Empty Eyes

I'll Try To Protect You From It's Grasp

While I'll Cling To It's Embrace

For It's All I Have Left

Reviews

[Indirector]

I'm smart so I slice.
Whether it's the irony or just the way it sounds...it's a badass line.
Worth the price of eyestraining through a work where every word is capitalized. I know you're not asking for an opinion on it but...don't do that. It's never a good idea.
Anyway, the repetition of the tell me part and the following responses to each of those lines in turn is very successful. A good piece.

[Liz]

You have a great descriptive poem here, and such wonderful skill for only being 13 years old. This poem contains a slight amount of end rhyme, and i like that about it. The ending sums everything up very well. I enjoyed reading this very very much.
Great job!