The aching hearts

Romeo & Juliet

Romeo, deeply wounded by Cupid's arrow,
Quickly sees his love turned into sorrow.
Lost in a pain too strong to bear,
Now forever of his lover takes care,
And as a tear on his young cheeks rolls
He can hear his tragic fate that calls:
"Come cordial, and not poison, go with me
To Juliet's grave, for there must I use thee."

Reviews

[Kyle]

This sounds terrific! Is this a line from one of the movie versions itself, or did you create this from scratch?

Please dont be offended by the question.

[Everett DeValle]

I loved the flow and structure. A lovely poem.

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh this poem was so amazing. The way you used Romeo and Juliet in here was the perfect touch the poem blossomed! :)

~Lizzy~

[whispereversolightly]

reading this gave me chills, i loved the last two lines the most.
This is wonderful, very poetic.

[highthought]

u took us back to romeo and Juliet u have a strong English to explore those feelings which are hard to find these days

[Jessica Danielle]

I dont think I've really actually seen a fan poem of romeo and juliet. i really liked reading this. you put good imagery into this. it is a very touching poem.