The aching hearts

The aching hearts

A Poem by ~Unashamed Love~
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Romeo & Juliet

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Romeo, deeply wounded by Cupid's arrow,
Quickly sees his love turned into sorrow.
Lost in a pain too strong to bear,
Now forever of his lover takes care,
And as a tear on his young cheeks rolls
He can hear his tragic fate that calls:
"Come cordial, and not poison, go with me
To Juliet's grave, for there must I use thee."

© 2011 ~Unashamed Love~


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This sounds terrific! Is this a line from one of the movie versions itself, or did you create this from scratch?

Please dont be offended by the question.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved the flow and structure. A lovely poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh this poem was so amazing. The way you used Romeo and Juliet in here was the perfect touch the poem blossomed! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

reading this gave me chills, i loved the last two lines the most.
This is wonderful, very poetic.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

u took us back to romeo and Juliet u have a strong English to explore those feelings which are hard to find these days

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I dont think I've really actually seen a fan poem of romeo and juliet. i really liked reading this. you put good imagery into this. it is a very touching poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 16, 2010
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~Unashamed Love~
~Unashamed Love~

Nashville, TN



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