Hit the Ceiling

I managed to get out of my skin

And float above it all

There’s not much left WITHIN

I may have lost MY SOUL.

 

ALL that’s keeping me conscious

IS an eternal field of green

Making me dizzy, nauseous

Disgustingly obscene.

 

My memory is not as good

But I like it that way

Life is S**T, so is my mood

And what I am today.

 

 

Reviews

[Domo]

This poem carries a lot of emotion and meaning in it.
The message is clearly written out, and is made.
Great poem.
~D♥m♥~

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem is a punch in the chest. There is such emotion!

[An owl on the moon]

Your words convey such awesome emotion and anxiety... A deep feeling of lostness... From my own history I could relate too well. Brilliant write!

[RAWR!]

aaah dude this was great. spot on

[deeps]

My memory is not as good
But I like it that way
Life is S**T, so is my mood
And what I am today.

Oh Man! I love those lines!
Very well said and stated.