Tendencies

Tendencies

A Poem by ~Unashamed Love~

Counting the seconds, never ending

Each shard of glass, slowly cutting

 

Now a different sickness

Rips up my insides

 

The distance increases

Dreams as excuses

Ignore the voices

As your mind rages.

 

© 2010 ~Unashamed Love~


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Very much liekd this poem it seemed to call out to me in a simple way of how i can or other behave when angry - closing of people - furthering the distance - everyones an enemy haha. I think this is a really good piece and you have talent. I think you could add to this poem an make it really amazing.
Ted
ps gd rating from me


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very much liekd this poem it seemed to call out to me in a simple way of how i can or other behave when angry - closing of people - furthering the distance - everyones an enemy haha. I think this is a really good piece and you have talent. I think you could add to this poem an make it really amazing.
Ted
ps gd rating from me


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on September 24, 2009
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~Unashamed Love~
~Unashamed Love~

Nashville, TN



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