Fall, Drown, Hang, Suffocate, Nothing special

Fall, Drown, Hang, Suffocate, Nothing special

A Poem by ~Unashamed Love~

 

 

Why do you wake?

What do you see?

When will you break?

Where should you be?

 

Too much noise

And too much pain

Keep your poise

Or go insane

 

Right or wrong

Weak or strong

Can’t stop the ride

Too late to jump

Nowhere to hide

Starting to slump

 

All is spinning faster, faster

What doesn’t kill you

Makes you weaker

 

 

© 2010 ~Unashamed Love~


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Fast paced and crazy, sound like life itself... nice job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this. It seems hectic, yet flows well. Nice job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 29, 2009
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~Unashamed Love~
~Unashamed Love~

Nashville, TN



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