Broken

What you say now won't stop the bleeding
For my life is already ending
Your fingers so tight around my heart
Keep holding me till I can't breathe
Why can't you see I'm falling apart
The smiles on your lips hurt so deep
I'll try to run away from here
Breathe again, wipe away my tear
In your eyes, all those words unspoken
But I'm still sitting here, broken

Reviews

[Verneé]

This is a quiet piece describing a painful event. Those that we long to love us always hurts us the most. Sadly, they continue on unaffected and we're left behind picking up the pieces that the shattered us into. Nicely written.

[Aly]

Wow.
This is really good ^^

[LlamaLord]

Ah, this wound we call a heart. That always my way of looking at poems such as this. I like how you described the smiles he has. It truly explains how you feel about him now. Keep writin!!! :D

[Erin]

Wow, this is. . . . deep. I really like this poem. I think it explains a lot about what so many people are going through now a days. You did a good job.

[Aprils Child]

Wow I am actually ready to cry. I feel the emotion that you were trying to covey. Good poem I will look forward to reading more of your work